Analysis of The Toys

Coventry Patmore 1823 (Woodford, London) – 1896 (Lymington)



My little Son, who look'd from thoughtful eyes
And moved and spoke in quiet grown-up wise,
Having my law the seventh time disobey'd,
I struck him, and dismiss'd
With hard words and unkiss'd,
—His Mother, who was patient, being dead.
Then, fearing lest his grief should hinder sleep,
I visited his bed,
But found him slumbering deep,
With darken'd eyelids, and their lashes yet
From his late sobbing wet.
And I, with moan,
Kissing away his tears, left others of my own;
For, on a table drawn beside his head,
He had put, within his reach,
A box of counters and a red-vein'd stone,
A piece of glass abraded by the beach,
And six or seven shells,
A bottle with bluebells,
And two French copper coins, ranged there with careful art,
To comfort his sad heart.
So when that night I pray'd
To God, I wept, and said:
Ah, when at last we lie with trancèd breath,
Not vexing Thee in death,
And Thou rememberest of what toys
We made our joys,
How weakly understood
Thy great commanded good,
Then, fatherly not less
Than I whom Thou hast moulded from the clay,
Thou'lt leave Thy wrath, and say,
'I will be sorry for their childishness.'


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101111101 0101010111 1011010101 111001 11101 1101110101 1101111101 110011 1111001 110101101 111101 0111 100111110111 1101010111 1110111 0111000111 01111101 011101 01011 011101111101 110111 111111 111101 1111111111 110101 011111 11101 11001 110101 110011 111111101 111101 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,134
Words 208
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 33
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 864
Words per stanza (avg) 205
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Coventry Patmore

Coventry Kersey Dighton Patmore was an English poet and critic best known for The Angel in the House, his narrative poem about an ideal happy marriage. more…

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