Analysis of How do I define - just patience



How do I define the feelings I hold in my Heart ?
How do I see the vision of you in front of like me just Yesterday ? My heart empty .. and yet this love I hold knows it belongs to you .
why must you be so at a distant ? Why must you be so Brave , Your Strength , Your pride , Your determination to make this world proud of you.

When you Signed up for Military duty - did you ever think you'd be called upon ? All the special trainings , all the hard work ..

I know made you the man your are today ... But how do I define the Place in my heart you hold & the emptiness it feels when your away .

I long to vision the smile upon your face once again , your touch , your every breath that I feel when your next to me ..

just knowing your alive .. next to me is a relief that no man can feel ..I await your return ..to me your family

and in my heart is love for you .... so how do I define

just Patience ...

BY: LAURA EGGEBRECHT


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Characters 915
Words 185
Sentences 17
Stanzas 8
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Lines Amount 10
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Words per line (avg) 20
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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LAURA M. EGGEBRECHT

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