Analysis of How do I define - just patience
How do I define the feelings I hold in my Heart ?
How do I see the vision of you in front of like me just Yesterday ? My heart empty .. and yet this love I hold knows it belongs to you .
why must you be so at a distant ? Why must you be so Brave , Your Strength , Your pride , Your determination to make this world proud of you.
When you Signed up for Military duty - did you ever think you'd be called upon ? All the special trainings , all the hard work ..
I know made you the man your are today ... But how do I define the Place in my heart you hold & the emptiness it feels when your away .
I long to vision the smile upon your face once again , your touch , your every breath that I feel when your next to me ..
just knowing your alive .. next to me is a relief that no man can feel ..I await your return ..to me your family
and in my heart is love for you .... so how do I define
just Patience ...
BY: LAURA EGGEBRECHT
Scheme | XAA X X B B X X X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110101011011 111101011011111101110011111110111 1111110101111111111100101111111 11111100101110111101101011011 111101110111110101011110100111101 11110010111101111100111111111 110101111100111111101101111100 00111111111101 110 110100 |
Characters | 915 |
Words | 185 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 10 |
Letters per line (avg) | 68 |
Words per line (avg) | 20 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 85 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
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Submitted on May 02, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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