Analysis of Hot Girl / Hard Times



I don't mind doin' a drug run
I just don't like the drive home
If I try makin' a muscle
Them piggies'll crack my bones

My d*ck ain't detachable
This sh*t's retractable
So I can jock my stash

Drop your *ss down lower
It's not a show-er, it's a grow-er
and I'm gettin' too big for my britches
too saucy and salty for these b*tch*s

Pole vaulting across your moat
I can pitch a sailboat so
drop the soap,
I said the boy is gifted
It's a sleepover with the local lunatic
Bologna and mayo
This ain't no picnic

Drop that *ss and give me twenty
My weather vane is pointed and plenty
The sausage is plump
and your eggs is sunny
The pool is luke
Let's make some honey

I don't mind doin' a dope run
I just don't like the drive home
If I try movin' a muscle
Them piggies'll break my bones

Hard times handed down from the one and only
She's Nefertiti
I'm humbled and homely
A wise man once told me
Sometimes you ride
sometimes you get ridden by the pony
In the name of all that's holy
She got the power to control me!

Isn't it sadism
that the big dogs use
and sedatives
to keep the p*ssy confused?


Scheme aBcd ccx eexx fgxxhgh iixixi aBcd ifiixiii xxdx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 1111011 1111011 11110010 11111 11110100 1110100 111111 111110 110101010 011111110 11001011111 1100111 111011 101 1101110 101101010 010010 1111 11101110 1101110010 01011 011110 0111 11110 1111011 1111011 1111010 11111 11101101010 11 110010 011111 0111 011110101 00111110 110101011 101100 10111 01 1101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,045
Words 215
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 7, 6, 4, 8, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wesley Morin

I was borne in the soul of misery and I never had me a name... they just gave me a number when I was young... ***BANNED IN A HUNDRED THOUSAND COUNTRIES*** more…

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