Analysis of Hope - Children's rhyme




It knocked at my door
In the middle of May
With a promise in store
in the bloom of the day

Allured by th' notion
That all is not lost
I leaped in one motion
As medieval Joust

Took breath for one moment
To settle the nerve
For all that was dormant
Unleashed my reserve

It took but a second
Unlocking the chain
With neither great effort
Nor strength to abstain

The anticipation
Of nearing bliss
Unveiled impatience
Erased all my wits

The Might of the Truth
Was about to enter
All doubts removed
With one sound one gander

I swung the door open
And stood there pinned
with heart Instantly frozen
By the whimsical WIND


Scheme ABAB CXCX DEDE XFXF CXXX XGXG CXCX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (57%)
Metre 11111 001011 101001 001101 0111110 11111 110110 10101 111110 11001 111110 01101 111010 01001 110110 11101 00010 1101 01010 01111 01101 101110 1101 111110 110110 0111 1110010 101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 586
Words 116
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on July 01, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alina Frenkel

English is not my first language nevertheless this is my language now and I always felt compelled to write not for the sake of calling it poetry or prose but for no particular reason :-) more…

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