Analysis of 'If I were dead'

Coventry Patmore 1823 (Woodford, London) – 1896 (Lymington)



'IF I were dead, you'd sometimes say, Poor Child!'
The dear lips quiver'd as they spake,
And the tears brake
From eyes which, not to grieve me, brightly smiled.
Poor Child, poor Child!
I seem to hear your laugh, your talk, your song.
It is not true that Love will do no wrong.
Poor Child!
And did you think, when you so cried and smiled,
How I, in lonely nights, should lie awake,
And of those words your full avengers make?
Poor Child, poor Child!
And now, unless it be
That sweet amends thrice told are come to thee,
O God, have Thou no mercy upon me!
Poor Child!


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101101111 0111111 0011 1111111101 1111 1111111111 1111111111 11 0111111101 1101011101 01111111 1111 010111 1101111111 1111110011 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 573
Words 112
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 426
Words per stanza (avg) 109
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Coventry Patmore

Coventry Kersey Dighton Patmore was an English poet and critic best known for The Angel in the House, his narrative poem about an ideal happy marriage. more…

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