Analysis of Help me



The clouds are my feet
The sky is my mind
The weather in my brain
Is unbelievably unkind
The rain are my thoughts
The sun is my fire
The weather in my brain
Has lost its desire
Rainbow me up
Need that pot of gold
The storms in my mind
Leave me unbearably cold
Please help me find a shady spot
To ease my mind thanks a lot


Scheme abCbdeCefgbghh
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 01111 010011 1010001 01111 011110 010011 111010 111 11111 01011 1101001 11110101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 308
Words 68
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 254
Words per stanza (avg) 68
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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