Analysis of Hello, Seattle



Heavy clouds cool with rain

Stretch down from the skies

And cuddle atop the buildings

We could almost touch the sunrise

Evergreens line the roads that travel
In between the hills and highlands

Coffee steam swirls envelop me
and I forget all of my plans

The watery brine of

Puget Sound

Nosily tugging

Early boaters around

And the blue waters, sandy deep

Tickle my toes, Oh memories I'll keep

The city yawns cooly

Few seagulls accompany the song

Midday brings the sun

Morning boats still tug along

Wide eyes grasp Mt. Rainier

Sipping fog and cloud tea

Hiding beneath sparkling snowcaps 

Only her eyes I see

Ferries quietly travel, the familiar

Come and go

Turn and look around you
Sunsets set the scene aglow

Listening at the bird's call

But I can only hear the rainfall

Counting time in steady drops
Hope it never stops

Around this city

Souvenirs make up the years

While store entrance bells

Ring and rattle

Closing the door behind me


Scheme XAXA BXCX XDXDEE BFXF XCAC XGXG HHIIC XXBC
Poetic Form
Metre 101111 11101 01001010 111101 10101110 00101010 10110101 01011111 010011 101 110 101001 00110101 1011110011 01011 11010001 1101 1011101 111101 101011 1001101 100111 10100100010 101 101011 110101 1 1001011 11110101 1010101 11101 01110 011101 11101 1010 1001011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 985
Words 169
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6, 4, 4, 10, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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