Analysis of He's a Poem



You're a poem too
 A couplet, a haiku
 An abridged limerick maybe

You're stuck in the margins
 Of a school paper
 I was too bored to read

I jotted you down
 When I was supposed to compose
 a verse for someone else

But he's the kind of rhyme
 That started in the middle
 And hasn't come back around yet

One I sat down to draft at twenty-one
 And won't finish till I'm hopefully
 Well over a hundred

A real, illuminated idea
 That takes time, revision… a process
 Something I want to write

The next line, metaphor, dialogue
 Ebbing from pen to paper
 Carefully maybe, but easily too

Somehow the pen went askew
 Jotting down scribbles where there should have been
 A resplendent allegory

And now he's a kind of
 ‘To be continued', and I
 Have writer's block


Scheme AAB XCX XXX XXX XBX XXX XCA AXB XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 01010 10110010 110010 10110 111111 11011 11101101 01111 110111 1100010 01011011 1111111101 011011100 110010 010100010 11101001 101111 01110010 1011110 1001011001 101101 111011111 0010100 011011 1101001 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 740
Words 137
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on January 25, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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