Analysis of Gone



I can feel her breath whispering in my ears.
I feel her flesh course yet soft.
Her touch,the warmth.
Her caress, the chill.
I can feel her arms,
Holding me tight,
As if they`ll never let me go.
I can taste her lips, sweet as Love.
My hand is in her hair, wet and dark,
travelling down her face.
Her eyes an essense of pain.
Her arms loosen, mine tighten.
I can feel her go, but dont want her to leave.
She caresses my face, for the last time.
Her hands in my hair for the last time.
Her head on my shoulder, for the last time.
Her lips on my lips for the last time.
She creates a void in my heart,
And then she's gone.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNNNNOP
Poetic Form
Metre 11101100011 1101111 011 00101 11101 1011 11110111 11101111 111001101 100101 011111 0110110 11101111011 1010111011 010111011 0111101011 011111011 10101011 0111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 600
Words 128
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 464
Words per stanza (avg) 127
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Submitted by mustafa_m on November 07, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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