Analysis of Glowing Like Your Lips



On these sands I stand alone
horizon far I see,
Orange glow is everywhere
sun then waves to me.

Once I stood their with my beauty
searching for our dreams,
Now my eyes look to the heavens
not all's what it seems.

Pretty lady what see you
in skies that glow so bright,
If my eyes were that horizon
I would hold you tight.

My heart holds your footprints
a soul that keeps your smile,
Still I feel your glowing lips
pray kiss me all the while.

Bobby Ferguson 24/08/2014.


Scheme XAXA ABXB XCDC XEXE D
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 010111 101110 11111 11111110 101101 11111010 11111 1010111 011111 11101010 11111 11111 011111 1111101 111101 10100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 451
Words 90
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on December 01, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bobby Ferguson

Samantha Summer or Alan Ostrow take it in turns to pimp all poetry on here, who's pimping you both cant a $50 bucks a night and $40 to your pimps who throw you about between them all then send you here, If it's that good what are you doing on this site, pimped by pimps, lol more…

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