Analysis of From Your Obsessive Lover

Mesut Selvi 1957 (TURKEY)



I used to be an unconscious obsessive lover for a long time,
But now I want to be an irresistible real lover of you.
Though my friends say me that I am a miserable lover
And my love is a vain hope, like writing on water or darkness.
I am extremely happy and peaceful, for I've loved you up to now.
I want you to understand me, accept me
And give an answer to my love.
Listen to me, hear me and realize how powerful a love I feel to you;
To show and prove my virgin and wild love for you and to my friends.
I've visited rain forests and jungles to grow my love symbols in them.
I've planted various love seeds and colorful attractive love flowers;
To grow fresh, brand-new, and natural loves of the world with my hands;
To send you my original love messages when you need my love.
When they grow, they'll be unique love symbols for all lovers.
To count uncountable amount and the power of my love for you,
I'll name and number them
As "obsessive lover flower one, two, three" and so on.
I'll send them to you as different love smells and bunches every day,
"Your Obsessive Lover" will be written on a card
To remind you my love.
I call you again to hear me and understand me, my irresistible love.
Now I am a conscious obsessive lover who loves you from far away,
And waits for your decision which will make me your real lover.


Scheme ABCDEFGBHIJKGJBILMNGGMC
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110010101011 1111111010011011 111111110100010 0111011110110110 11010100101111111 1111011011 01110111 1011110101100011111 1101110011110111 110011001011111001 110100110100010110 1111101001101111 11110100110011111 11111011101110 11101001011111 110101 10101010111011 111111100110101001 1010101110101 101111 111011110011101001 111010010101111101 011101011111110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,304
Words 257
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,030
Words per stanza (avg) 257
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Submitted on January 17, 2010

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Mesut Selvi

I was born in Ankara, Turkey; i educated all of my primary, secondary, high schools and also 4 years English Departmanı of Gazi University in Ankara Türkiye/TURKEY. I worked as an English Teacher in different Level Government High Schools of different cities of TURKEY. Now adays, i and my family live in İzmir City of Turkey. Although i am Boeing a retired English Teacher, i also work as a private English Teacher,Tutor and Translator for Private Turkish all type High School or University Students,Turkish TouristicalGroups and also Local Notary Offices/Buros, as an active Free teacher. more…

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