Analysis of Four Walls



In my head there stand four walls,
Four, until one decided to fall.
It fell and crushed my innocent heart,
Now what was left is torn apart.
So three walls now stand in my damaged head,
Then another one fell and then I bled,
For, I never would have saw it coming,
From thoughts in my mind that kept on running.
So two walls standing face to face,
Nothing else to fill the space.
But now I've learned about these walls,
They were never strong at all.
Just a figure inside my head,
A pile of bricks and a body that's dead.


Scheme ABCCDDEEFFABDD
Poetic Form
Metre 0111111 10111011 110111001 11111101 1111101101 1010110111 1110111110 1101111110 11110111 1011101 11110111 1010111 10100111 0111001011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 506
Words 102
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 400
Words per stanza (avg) 102
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Laura Micari

Hey guys, My name is Laura Micari. I am thirteen years old and I live in PA. Last time I tried to write this,it got deleted so I'm trying again. Well, my writing and poetry is mostly about my feelings, and things that have happened in my life. I have a book of poems that is still, slowly being filled and I finally decided to do something with them. Here are some random things about me: I am a Christian-so I LOVE God, my favorite colors are all the bright ones (and occasionally black), My favorite food is mac and cheese, and I own a chihuahua named Max. I find my words to be very inspirational, so if you ever need it, email me at purplestarz86@yahoo.com. Feel free to email me whenever you want to. I promise to respond.Peace and Love, Laura more…

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