Analysis of Four



Screen door screamed a Southern song
Mama's big browns watched, hands pressed against the mesh
Four years old and I knew all the words
Daddy called me Suzy-Q in an accent thicker than humidity
Thicker than the Spanish moss

Two doors down the neighbor boy kept snakes
In a vacant room at the top of his house
We sat as balls
On chairs
In circles
And endured the snakes' release
I squirmed more than most

Dirt road home hid many things
Broken bottle sliced my foot; I did not cry
In the tub, Mama used sugar to stop the bleeding, and I
Delighted in Daddy's love offering
Cinnamon hots in a cooler cup
From Uncle Charlie's gas station


Scheme XXXXX XXXXXXX XAAXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 10111110101 111011101 101110101011010100 1010101 111010111 00101101111 1111 11 010 0010101 11111 1111101 10101111111 001101101101001 0100101100 100100101 11010110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 614
Words 118
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 168
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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