Analysis of For my baby Mu



Mind is racing,
I am scared,
What am i facing?
What's been shared?
Wanting to fight,
Into the night,
But afraid 'n aching.
No pains been spared.
The questions flare!
It isnt fair!
You're mine,
Not for the taking!
But damages,
Bring savages,
My heart,
Forever breaking!
Wiremu,
I love you!
My boy, my friend,
My child!
And i will fight,
Until the end,
Or be forever Wild!
To have you in my arms again,
My beautiful little child.

(mummy misses you so bad
I cannot change what's happened,
And im so very sad.
Im sorry if you seen me cry,
Or even seen me mad.
I just want you in my arms,
but love is all i have)


Scheme ABABCCABDDXAEEXAXXFGCFGXG HXHXHXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 111 11110 111 1011 0101 101110 1111 0101 111 11 11010 1100 1100 11 01010 1 111 1111 11 0111 0101 110101 11101101 1100101 1010111 1101110 011101 11011111 110111 1111011 111111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 576
Words 119
Sentences 15
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 25, 7
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Geni Kelepouris

I began writing when i was 16. I enjoy expressing myself through all forms of art ( my profile pic is one of my art pieces). I have had a life full of tragedies and suffer post traumatic stress. I find that art and writing soothes my soul and allows me to heal from all the pain that has been haunting me. I have an obsession with existence and love nothing more than to discuss all the different theories of why we are here. My poems cover a range of topics from love and inspiration to complete random mania. There are also some very deep poems that i needed to write to get the sorrow from my life. I just hope whoever is reading them enjoys them. more…

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