Analysis of Fluid Acceptance



As I stood there letting the egg drip down my face

it slid slowly down my neck past amitivity

I felt it pool then

making heavy the hollow space in my chest

allowing previously entertaining thoughts

of precious love


Scheme X A X A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111110011111 111011111 11111 10100101011 01010000101 1101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 246
Words 43
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted on September 05, 2009

Modified on March 05, 2023

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