Analysis of Flames of desire



FLAMES OF DESIRE
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I know the words in my mind for you to inspire
But I only use those world hungered to aspire
My internal lust is on fire in flames of desire
Your body makes a nude painting without attire

My mind listens unsung song of delighted union
External limbs need bathe in your oceanic potion
Brain craves to smell the fragrance of your bud
Eyes fixed on the flowered navel of belly sacred

How mind changes mask in presence of sun
How feelings change in presence of noisy gun
How emotions burst in ongoing lovely choice
How internal organs reflex in enchanting voice

Why do I not tell in words I long for your touch
Of Mouth,cheeks,neck,breast and waist couch
Living together does not serve the eternal love
Touch me softly my all organs O my lovely Dove

~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~~


Scheme A BBAA CCDD CCEE XXFF X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 1 110101111101 11101111101 101011110011010 1101011001010 1110011101010 0101110101010 1111010111 1110101011010 1110101011 11010101101 10101010101 1010101000101 111110111111 11011 1001011100101 1110111011101 110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 787
Words 147
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on March 20, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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