Analysis of Figment of Crushed Spices (on a summer afternoon)



clothed in saffron silk, her bare feet tread
close to the riverbank.
damp earth and grass muddy
the frayed edge of her sari

cinnamon goddess, one arm encircled with
emerald glass bangles, other graced
by a tamarind vine painted with henna

his lips whisper against her dusty wrist,
tongue traces a vein into the crook of her elbow

she shivers
her skin glistening, glittering brown
wine dark with desire

he inhales her rose jasmine hair,
smells leftover summer in her neck,
long, languid and revealed

her wind tangled hair, copper-glossed by the sun
and he, with breath scented like cloves and ginger,
kisses her and tastes water and earth.


Scheme XXAA XXX XX XXB XXX XBX
Poetic Form
Metre 101010111 11010 110110 0111010 10010110101 10110101 101110110 1110010101 110010101101 110 011001001 111010 1101101 11010001 110001 01101101101 01111011010 100011001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 621
Words 109
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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