Analysis of Improvisations: Light And Snow: 09

Conrad Potter Aiken 1889 (Savannah, Georgia) – 1973 (Savannah, Georgia)



This girl gave her heart to me,
And this, and this.
This one looked at me as if she loved me,
And silently walked away.
This one I saw once and loved, and never saw her again.
Shall I count them for you upon my fingers?
Or like a priest solemnly sliding beads?
Or pretend they are roses, pale pink, yellow, and white,
And arrange them for you in a wide bowl
To be set in sunlight?
See how nicely it sounds as I count them for you —
‘This girl gave her heart to me
And this, and this, . . . !
And nevertheless, my heart breaks when I think of them,
When I think their names,
And how, like leaves, they have changed and blown
And will lie, at last, forgotten,
Under the snow.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 0101 1111111111 0100101 11111010101001 11111101110 1101100101 1011110111001 0011110011 11101 111011111111 1110111 0101 000111111111 11111 011111101 01111010 1001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 668
Words 135
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 506
Words per stanza (avg) 137
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Conrad Potter Aiken

Conrad Potter Aiken was a Pulitzer Prize-winning American author born in Savannah Georgia whose work includes poetry short stories novels and an autobiography more…

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