Analysis of Exile

Conrad Potter Aiken 1889 (Savannah, Georgia) – 1973 (Savannah, Georgia)



These hills are sandy. Trees are dwarfed here. Crows
Caw dismally in skies of an arid brilliance,
Complain in dusty pine-trees. Yellow daybreak
Lights on the long brown slopes a frost-like dew,
Dew as heavy as rain; the rabbit tracks
Show sharply in it, as they might in snow.
But it’s soon gone in the sun — what good does it do?
The houses, on the slope, or among brown trees,
Are grey and shrivelled. And the men who live here
Are small and withered, spider-like, with large eyes.

Bring water with you if you come to live here —
Cold tinkling cisterns, or else wells so deep
That one looks down to Ganges or Himalayas.
Yes, and bring mountains with you, white, moon-bearing,
Mountains of ice. You will have need of these
Profundities and peaks of wet and cold.

Bring also, in a cage of wire or osier,
Birds of a golden colour, who will sing
Of leaves that do not wither, watery fruits
That heavily hang on long melodious boughs
In the blue-silver forests of deep valleys.

I have now been here — how many years? Years unnumbered.
My hands grow clawlike. My eyes are large and starved.
I brought no bird with me, I have no cistern
Where I might find the moon, or river, or snow.
Some day, for lack of these, I’ll spin a web
Between two dusty pine-tree tops, and hang there
Face downward, like a spider, blown as lightly
As ghost of leaf. Crows will caw about me.
Morning and evening I shall drink the dew.


Scheme XXXAXBACDX DXXECX DEXXC AXXBXXFFA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111011111 110001111010 0101011101 1101110111 1110110101 1100111101 111100111111 01010110111 1101001111 11010101111 11011111111 11001011111 11111101010 10110111110 1011111111 1011101 11000111011 110101111 11111101001 110011101001 00110101110 11111110111 1111111101 11111111110 11110111011 1111111101 01110111011 11010101110 1111111011 1001011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,395
Words 265
Sentences 20
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 6, 5, 9
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 272
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:19 min read
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Conrad Potter Aiken

Conrad Potter Aiken was a Pulitzer Prize-winning American author born in Savannah Georgia whose work includes poetry short stories novels and an autobiography more…

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