Analysis of Depression



Once a bellowed lucent heart
Astonished by the love around
Now watching everyone part
As a black dove bound

Sensing the waves catching up to me
Anxiety deceiving my mind
The water is no longer a blue sea
But I was once so kind

Now I am a brittle stone
I can no longer hold on
Feeling more and more unknown
I fade within shadows upon dawn

But now I have drowned
Aware of soothing warmth
The birds no longer sing


Scheme ABAB CDCD EXEX BXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 1010101 01010101 110101 10111 100110111 010001011 0101110011 111111 1110101 1111011 1010101 11011011 11111 011101 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 396
Words 81
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on April 10, 2023

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