Analysis of Dangerous To Dream



Laying under a veil of stars,
twinkling lights confetti night.
Appearing so familiar,
they're a beautiful sight.

I take the time to write this,
for your memory haunts me.
And I miss you so much, just
thinking how things use to be.

It's said God favors desert lands,
and that gives my heart a thrill.
Funny philosophizing
about God, when sent to kill.

Got some letters from strangers,
saying they are real proud of me.
I can't describe how that feels,
it's what it means to be free.

I wish I could hold you tight,
and every night my heart pines.
Yet it's dangerous to dream,
while dodging bullets and mines.

Watching shooting stars zip by,
I make a wish to go home.
But while in Afghanistan,
it's unsafe to let thoughts roam.


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XBXB ADXD XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 10100111 10010101 0101010 101001 1101111 1110011 0111111 1011111 11110101 0111101 101 0111111 1110110 10111111 1101111 1111111 1111111 01001111 1110011 1101001 1010111 1101111 110010 1011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 701
Words 133
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Emile Pinet

I was born in a small town, (Bathurst) New Brunswick, Canada,. The third eldest of thirteen children, ten girls and three boys. I’m the product of a semi-dysfunctional family, brought up by a controlling, physically abusive father, verses a loving mother. Many of my poems reflect the uniqueness and special circumstances of my upbringing. more…

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