Analysis of Cold Acceptance



When all is said and done,
When the west is finally won,
Will I still have a home
Beneath these big blue skies?

They fill their mouths full of lies
Beneath the scorching sun,
And there's nowhere left to run.
We are a people left without a home.

Our nation is far scattered.
Our homes are left in tatters.
My mother's dead...
My father's gone...
And somehow I'm the one
That's in the wrong.

They say that forgiveness is power,
And that may be true.
But the words you speak are sour;
And the only thing I owe you,
Is cold acceptance....
That there's nothing I can do.

This trail is marked by tears
Of a ravaged and mourning people.
Time has remembered those years
Of a nation once proud and regal.


Scheme AABC CAAB XXXXAX DEDEXE XFXF
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 10111001 111101 011111 1111111 010101 011111 1101010101 10101110 10111010 1101 1101 01101 1001 111010110 01111 10111110 00101111 11010 1110111 111111 101001010 1101011 101011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 672
Words 132
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6, 6, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on February 02, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ashley Stoltzfus

Hi, my name is Ashley. I have been writing for quite a while and have written many a things. Some things are not that great and need not be shared, the rest shall be for your amusement. When I get older and closer to retirement and much wise, I hope to write poems as a post-retirement career. Thank you for visiting and enjoy~! more…

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