Analysis of Clouds on canvas



Clouds on canvas
When all hopes wither
When fails all pride
Jealousy and lust undress each other`s sites
In the marble-hall of desire and dolls
Especially in the October wind.
I try in vain to retrace my brain
In unveiling you in my disgrace and pain
Especially in the october wind
I see my shadows weep
Weep to forget,weak to face
the fragmentations of love in the furnace
of your farm,flame
Unsteady I stand, weird I walk leaning
on the elbows of the October Bride
On and on,she changes her clime
black to blue, blue to indigo
Clouds on canvas moves smooth slow
Shedding the semen of life
On the Earth`s Fallopian Flute!


Scheme abcdeFggFhiajkcjllmn
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 1110 11110 1111 1000101111 00101101001 010000101 110110111 00101010101 010000101 11111 11111 01110010 111 0101111110 101100101 1011001 1111110 1110111 1001011 10101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 603
Words 116
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 502
Words per stanza (avg) 113
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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