Analysis of Childpain



You say you are hurt,
and still your life is an endless flirt.
Hoping to find that one who will understand,
and comfort you.

But hey babe don't you see it's you,
all along reliving your childpain?
Just hoping just maybe it will come to an end.
Driving everybody crazy,
including yourself.

Cause you can't let go,
of the fear and pain.
Makes it all seem invain,
and so your life becomes a show.

Yeaah babe it's you,
reminiscing of the past.
and maybe your pain,
will turn into growing pains.

Once you relax,
and let it be.
You'll be the one,
to end this childlike state.

You know it's never too late,
to change your fate.
Once you accept the past,
and move on!

Cause babe it's you,
who's gonna make the difference.
Between reenacting what has been,
or graciously accepting the way things work out.

Think about it babe,
you may not like the way things where.
But it's up to you,
how things are gonna be!


Scheme AAXB BCXDX ECCE BFCX XDCG GGFC BXCX XXBD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 011111101 1011111101 0101 11111111 10101011 110110111111 1010010 01001 11111 10101 11111 01110101 1111 010101 01011 1101101 1101 0111 1101 11111 1111011 1111 110101 011 1111 11010100 011111 110001001111 10111 11110111 11111 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 869
Words 169
Sentences 17
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on October 02, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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