Analysis of Burial In The Womb



you & i,mistletoe & wine
twine/untwine/time/tide
tulips torn;woman`s born
ship`s sunken;seamen songs
mermaids magnify;umbilical calls--
I & You;You & I
War in Iraq-drummings of the dry
Creamation,burial,watery goodbye
What`s lie There after we die?!
You & I cross & climb,fly & fight
Teeth to teeth sink giving out lights!
alive she cried,engulfing me live
Wind blew;petals flew
beauty-in-the-rose-bud bled anew
drunk in loveliquid slow and full-
a woman is bloomed
She`s spread in nude;Mighty Aphrodite smile
and look at my adam`s golden globe,meaningful
adam she dines,drinks,dry
Come my roses,come my muse


Scheme ABCDEFFFFGHIJJKLMJNO
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1111 1011 111 111 111 10011101 11 1111011 11111 11111011 011111 111 100011101 101101 01011 11010101 01111101 1011 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 589
Words 106
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 482
Words per stanza (avg) 91
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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