Analysis of Brought up in hatefulness

Karolina Marszałkowska 1993 (Gdańsk)



Hate me just like the enemy can
Mad like a bull, equally insane
Don't forgive cause it makes me feel bad
Why won't you hate me for all tears you shed?

I can't understand , I'd accept a curse
But not your kind smile, it just makes it worse
Something is wrong, how can you smile?
Are you pretending or you really feel fine?

Hate me just like my father used to
Build it like him, didin't know when  it grew
Maybe I'd feel better See? how egoistic
I never knew you could be so optimistic

I can't understand, you should think twice
Why won't you listen to my only advice?
Even if you won't I am gonna hate
Cause I hate this pain I somehow create


Scheme XXXX AAXX BBCC DDEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 111101001 110110001 101111111 1111111111 110110101 1111111111 10111111 11010111011 111111011 111111111 101110111 11011111010 11011111 11110111001 1011111101 111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 625
Words 126
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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