Analysis of Become What No one Wants to Become



BECOME ,WHAT NO  ONE WANTS TO BECOME
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Become what no one wants to Become
Void,vacuume,Zero
Soul Searcher to super consciousness

What we came here to do
Healing,Justice and love the Light
Neither you enjoyed the God's abundance shower
Nor you realize the effects of small things
Your heart only pocked in the four chambers position

Looking the animals in eye
We smell the slaughter house
There they do the darkness
Where there was light

And fish is also cooked
So you are what you have fallen
Aroma of surrounding gathering around us
Like the snake of our perpetual lust,greed
Attached us sensually  and grab us
Making us inferior  not  to  become gracefully
For what we came here to do.

~~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~


Scheme A ABC DEBXF XXCE XFCDCXD X
Poetic Form
Metre 011111101 1 011111101 1 110110100 111111 10101 101010101010 1110001111 1110100110010 10010001 110101 111010 1111 011101 11111110 0101010100011 10111001001 0111011 10101001101100 1111111 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 721
Words 127
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 7, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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