Analysis of Ashes



You were so beautiful
I was so small
I lost myself
Somewhere in you radiance
So much that
I thought I was
A part of it
An atom
Some crucial componant.
I was not.
You left,
And I
Like ashes
Remained.


Scheme ABCDEFGHEIJKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 101100 1111 111 101100 111 1111 0111 110 1101 111 11 01 110 01
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 185
Words 41
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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