Analysis of Almost Home
Crack the window
to keep my breath
constant
Waiting for you to come back
so we can cheat death
Counting the beads of sweat
Salty droplets
Tears of endurance
Smack my snout
and put me down
Savor the shreds of your indulgence
Tempt me with your tasty flesh
Activate my instincts
My sixth and seventh senses
Why should I come back home
if we can't be close together, misses?
What I miss the most is when she kisses
If only I could hold your hand
I feel like something bad is going to happen
She can speak to the animals...
but will she understand me in the muzzle,
when my straight jacket's been fastened?
This is never good-bye
It's not like I lost my mind
I know forever's a lie
I don't dare claim you're mine
This is never good-bye
I'll dream you back to life
I know the future
I'm out of time
The family is fragmented
so I can be excised, immersed
Now, do your worst, do your magick
and history's revised, reversed
Black sheep fleece
hanging from the clothesline
Now it seems I'm smiling
Skinned alive
How's this for trying?
A handful of confidence
dissolving in the white wine
(Scanning the faces for a sign of life)
I can't be cool
like I was
'cause I was never...
I never thought it would last forever
I can remember
when we were happy together
I can't just watch
like the last lucky guy who lost
your heart
I can't take another fall
in love
at any rate, at any cost
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1010 1111 10 1011111 11111 100111 1010 11100 111 0111 100111010 1111101 10110 1101010 111111 1111101010 1110111110 11011111 111101110110 11110100 1110110010 1111110 111011 1111111 11101 111111 111011 111111 11010 1111 01001100 1111101 1111111 01000101 111 10101 111110 101 11110 011100 0100011 1001010111 1111 111 11110 1101111010 11010 11010010 1111 10110111 11 1110101 01 11011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,317 |
Words | 262 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 14, 8, 8, 4, 8, 12 |
Lines Amount | 54 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 179 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
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Submitted on October 15, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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