Analysis of After-taste - to die for!



mmmm...
devoured posh, another bite
the lack of words persists!
and smell so smooth, endearing!
the head is carousel, assists
in tasting piece of heaven
senses veering!
still warm, still red and up for taking
melts on the lips and stomach warm
the after-taste - to die for!
how sweet this pleasure's aching

from what was seen on life's dynamic scene
be it a loss or win, apparently, it seems
this gluttony is hardly sin, oh heavens, such aroma!

- you're good?
- I'll have another piece!
- please, pass the salt
- and pepper?
- please!
- how 'bout desert?
- you silly tease!
- meals such as this, nirvana is achieved with ease
- mischief released!
- bon apetite!
- you too... you too, my darling!

two maggots finishing cadaver's body
what's not to like? romantic beings all around!
don't interrupt the meal with your reaction
those two are having too much fun!

p.s.
dedicated to all who like to judge prematurely


Scheme ABCDCEDDAXD XXA XXXXFXFFXBD GXEE CG
Poetic Form
Metre 1 01010101 011101 0111010 0111001 0101110 1010 111101110 11010101 0101111 111110 1111110101 110111010011 110011011101010 11 110101 1101 010 1 1110 1101 111101010111 1001 11 1111110 110100110 111101010101 1010111010 11110111 1 1000111111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 884
Words 165
Sentences 23
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 11, 3, 11, 4, 2
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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