Analysis of After That Our Past



The time is torn
when we were born
and after that our past.
The empty space
comes next to trace
and it must show at last.

Along our path
the simple math
is a matter of years.
It seems witty,
with a ditty,
to chant jingles in tears.

We hold our breath
to forestall death
as fear notice we send.
We lift the haze
and mend our ways
as we foresee the end.


Scheme AABCCB DDXEEX FFGHHG
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 1101 0101101 0101 1111 011111 01101 0101 101011 1110 1010 111001 11101 1011 111011 1101 01101 110101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 334
Words 73
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on February 05, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Dean LaBenne

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