Analysis of 100582



today is ur birthday rt,today ur 20
I wish i could kiss u happy birthday
but u won`t have me!october5,2002 sky`s been
dripping with rain,since she told me I`m not
her Prem;windy,wet,air in the wind wails
leaves sob,soaked with tearstorn rain;the
lights on the streets stretch to scream to
dream the Pain that Arti caused me,today is
her birthday,october 5th,2002,she`s 20
with tulips,roses,and robins she sing,swing,
celebrate,while I remain melancholy with
whiskey,whores,darkness!packs of Parliaments
in the form of smokey poems paint her smokey
figures,appearances in my room,where only I
review,relip,resip her Rememberances;today is
her birthday,sweet sleeps;I slip away,away
to the "Womb" to question,ask,reclaim,to
request-Please dear "Womb" don`t bring this
girl out to sunrise,sunset;


Scheme ABCDEFGHEIFJIKHLBMB
Poetic Form
Metre 0111111 111111101 1111111 101111111 010011 11111 11011111 10111111 01111 111011 11011001 11100 001110101010 1011101 1011 01111 10111 01111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 775
Words 145
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 642
Words per stanza (avg) 113
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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