Analysis of "The Lightning Bugs"



I love to watch the lightning bugs,
flying all around.
Blinking their lights all through the air
and sometimes on the ground.

It's such a sight for my eyes,
when hundreds do I see.
Blinking here and blinking there
and sometimes simultaneously.

I look at them in wonder,
as each does light the night.
Feeling like they're part of me,
watching them in flight.

Now every summer I come to watch,
those bugs put on their show.
Flying high and flying low,
blinking, blinking as they go.


Scheme XABA XCBC XDCD XEEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11110101 10101 10111101 001101 1101111 110111 1010101 00101000 1111010 111101 1011111 10101 1100101111 111111 1010101 1010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 465
Words 87
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 22
Font size:
 

Submitted on September 05, 2015

Modified on April 18, 2023

26 sec read
22

Donald E. Burns

I am sixty-two years old and live in Columbus,Ohio. I was born in Dayton,Ohio where I lived mostof my life.I started writing poetry after my wife of thirty years passed away in October 2000. I was heartbroken and devastated by this.I asked God for a sign to show me she was alright. He gave me more than I asked for. I had a vision of my wife and my grandson who had passed also, that lasted five minutes. It was so beautiful thatwords can't express how I felt.From that, I now write poetry to inspire as many hearts,minds and souls as I can with truthand love. To be written with words that all can understand. It's my thanks to God for what He did for me.I am now married to my first girl friend from jr. high,which is a blessing in itself. Learning how to use the computer for my poetry made that possible. I hadn't seen her for thirty-two years.I even proposed to her with a poem !All things Are possible with God.I more…

All Donald E. Burns poems | Donald E. Burns Books

0 fans

Discuss this Donald E. Burns poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    ""The Lightning Bugs"" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 21 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/63751/%22the-lightning-bugs%22>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    10
    days
    10
    hours
    38
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote this? 'Look on my Works, ye Mightyand despair!'
    A S.T. Coleridge
    B P. B. Shelley
    C William Wordsworth
    D William Shakespeare