Analysis of A Prayer from Distress

TommyD 1957 (Ft. Lee)



A Prayer from Distress

My outward trouble , and inward distress
Is just a reflection , this world is a mess

Annoyance arising , through war of the mind
Is just an example , so easy to find

The men of this world , that persecute me
Are only illusions , of trouble I see

Temptations that come , through Satan's delight
Are the sins I endure , through the trouble I fight

God breathed my existence , and then gave unto me
His Son , who's my Savior , who now sets me free

I lift up my hands , in Praise to my Lord
And now realize , that His word is my sword

I'm fighting the battle , with fervor and might
To undo the wrong , and do what is right

TommyD  2/25/21


Scheme A AA BB CC DD CC EE DD B
Poetic Form
Metre 01101 1101001001 11001011101 01001011101 11101011011 011111101 11001011011 010111101 101101101011 111010011101 11111011111 1111101111 0110111111 11001011001 1010101111 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 646
Words 122
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted by TommyD on February 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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TommyD

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