Analysis of Doreen



Fearing the worst we saw her off to hospital

when her leg turned black for the lack

of a fair supply of the red stuff.

Her life flashing before our eyes,

kept our tongues busy with what we knew

but did not see.  The cloud they both lived under

had not glimpsed blue skies for years.

The boy's not wired up right, his father said

of the grandson who lived with them and gave

grave abuse without relief unless you count

a week away with other family.

She was heroic, refusing to give him up;

the Old Man forced into muteness

by the blackmail of love.

They called us near the end, screened her off.

We sensed the nearness of the hearse

and heard her dying words,

“don’t let him know what's in your purse”.


Scheme X X X A X X X X X X X X A X X B X B
Poetic Form
Metre 10011101110 10111101 101011011 011001101 1101101111 11110111110 1111111 01110111101 101111101 10101010111 0101110100 110100101111 0111011 10111 111101101 1101101 010101 11111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 692
Words 135
Sentences 7
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on February 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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