Analysis of Doreen
Fearing the worst we saw her off to hospital
when her leg turned black for the lack
of a fair supply of the red stuff.
Her life flashing before our eyes,
kept our tongues busy with what we knew
but did not see. The cloud they both lived under
had not glimpsed blue skies for years.
The boy's not wired up right, his father said
of the grandson who lived with them and gave
grave abuse without relief unless you count
a week away with other family.
She was heroic, refusing to give him up;
the Old Man forced into muteness
by the blackmail of love.
They called us near the end, screened her off.
We sensed the nearness of the hearse
and heard her dying words,
“don’t let him know what's in your purse”.
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Metre | 10011101110 10111101 101011011 011001101 1101101111 11110111110 1111111 01110111101 101111101 10101010111 0101110100 110100101111 0111011 10111 111101101 1101101 010101 11111011 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 692 |
Words | 135 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 18 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 31 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 8 |
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Submitted on February 24, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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