Analysis of Her eyes



Sleepy eyes open wide
In the morning when the sunrises
Thinking thoughts running through her mind
That makes her eyes wanna cry
So much stress and sadness she carries deep inside
That ALL makes her eyes,  her eyes wanna cry.
From each tear she sheds.
 This Burn feeling of her eyes
The tears she sheds make road paths to her broken heart of deep below.
A gasp of breathe she takes in
Slowly and timely
The tears she sheds start to fade
With every wipe back to back from her now soaked face
She finds a breeze of fresh air.
Her Heart calms a beat


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101101 0010101 10110101 1101101 111010110101 1110101101 11111 1110101 0111111101011101 0111110 10010 0111111 1100111110111 1101111 01101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 533
Words 105
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 434
Words per stanza (avg) 106
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Submitted by Empathylight83 on February 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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