Analysis of Galaxy Bliss

TommyD 1957 (Ft. Lee)



Shooting stars, celestial light
Breaking through the dark of night

Incandescent moon and sun
Lights the Earth since time begun

Stellar remnants chasing flow
As comets and meteors enter the show

More stars than all the grains of sand
Up in the heavens vast expand

Milky Way , Andromeda too
The massive existence of dark holes who …

Are four million times greater than the sun
So nice to imagine morphology fun

Sheets and filaments surrounded by voids
Tenuous gases cannot be destroyed

Galaxies that , are so far away
That Earth is a speck in the vastness array

So here I am sitting , not wondering why
I am so astonished when I look to the sky


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE BB XX FF GG
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1010101 1010111 010101 1011101 1010101 11001001001 11110111 10010101 10101001 0100101111 1110110101 11101001001 1010001011 1001010101 100111101 11101001001 11111011001 111010111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 654
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted by TommyD on February 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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