Analysis of When You Find Yourself



A shovel ready job
For every Peter Paul and Bob
The line forms in the rear
You're welcome but be clear
Trouble begets heroes
One followed by zeroes
Crying in their beer

A hole takes its toll
Like a bridge with a troll
You sorrowful creature
Dig, digging dig deeper
Your tears will not float
Your sunken boat
Or make your misery dear

You're grasping at things
And pushing on strings
Embracing pity
That warm fluffy kitty
You think that's despair?
I hope you're aware
That soon you must pay the cashier

An octagon in red
The story you've been fed
Stop digging and you'll see
The shovel holds the key
Just use it in reverse
Your worries get no worse
Enjoy your somber souvenir


Scheme AABBCCB DDEEFFB GGHHIIB JJHHKKB
Poetic Form
Metre 010101 110010101 011001 110111 100110 110110 10011 01111 101101 110010 110110 11111 1101 1111001 11011 01011 01010 111010 11101 11101 11111001 11001 010111 110011 010101 111001 110111 0111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 651
Words 125
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on January 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bruce Jefferson Rose

American curmudgeon, grump and retired near-do-well. Shoveling snow in New England while wondering why. more…

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