Analysis of Highlen love of Loyalyn a story (The Rebirth of US)



Watching over her as I do each day. A woman of such beauty, she knows not how I feel of her. watching the colors of her eyes as she draws water from the well, I feel the calling of my heart. I lay here and wait for the sunrise of rain to fall upon me once again thinking of my love of Iriss, watching the shades, of her smile as her lips touch the light of the sun as she walks through the forest of dreams. I dare not say for am only a lost soul waiting to be capture by the heart of Iriss. Forever, I have felt this way.  what must I do to capture thy heart, I shall take the form of a mortal and make love to her mind, body, and soul. Only then shall I capture thy heart again, it has been too long my love have you forgotten me? You were once like me has it been too long for you in this mortal way? I shall become as you are only then will we become one as we were for a thousand years past. We have always been the high and the low of the land and we shall become that once more I will bring you the heart of life from past, present, and future only then will you remember me and your ancient name loyalyn. together once more will shall reign over this great land of ours. You once.  took my hand and touched my heart at the same time as I will yours again. I shall begin the making of me into a mortal way to capture us once more. I shall ride with the passion to your door and open your heart, I will present you the light of love from the garden of mastra the place of our beginning.

Day One Thousand                      part 1


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Submitted by KnightofPassion on January 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Marvin Bundy

Am a very mature laid back person. retired, loving living life I have two grown-up children. I live on the coast of CA I love anything fantasy that is related to it. more…

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