Analysis of A Eros (To Eros)

Alfonsina Storni 1892 (Sala Capriasca) – 1938 (Mar del Plata)



HE AQUI que te cacé por el pescuezo
a la orilla del mar, mientras movías
las flechas de tu aljaba para herirme
y vi en el suelo tu floreal corona.

Como a un muñeco destripé tu vientre
y examiné sus ruedas engañosas
y muy envuelta en sus poleas de oro
hallé una trampa que decía: sexo.

Sobre la playa, ya un guiñapo triste,
te mostré al sol, buscón de tus hazañas,
ante un corro asustado de sirenas.

Iba subiendo por la cuesta albina
tu madrina de engaños, Doña Luna,
y te arrojé a la boca de las olas.

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Translation

I caught you by the neck
on the shore of the sea, while you shot
arrows from your quiver to wound me
and on the ground I saw your flowered crown.

I disemboweled your stomach like a doll's
and examined your deceitful wheels,
and deeply hidden in your golden pulleys
I found a trapdoor that said: sex.

On the beach I held you, now a sad heap,
up to the sun, accomplice of your deeds,
before a chorus of frightened sirens.
Your deceitful godmother, the moon
was climbing through the crest of the dawn,
and I threw you into the mouth of the waves.   


Scheme AABC DADA EAA CCA X XEBX AAAA XAAXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 0101011111 11111101 1111111010 1001110111 111111 111111110 11011101 111011111 1111111111 1011111 1011110010 111111010 1110110111 1 010 111101 101101111 101110111 0101111101 11110101 001010101 01010011010 1101111 1011111011 1101010111 0101011010 10101001 110101101 01110101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,137
Words 207
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3, 2, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 01, 2023

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