Analysis of I said, This Misery Must End

Christopher John Brennan 1870 (Haymarket, New South Wales) – 1932 (Lewisham, New South Wales)



I SAID, This misery must end:  
Shall I, that am a man and know  
that sky and wind are yet my friend,  
sit huddled under any blow?  
so speaking left the dismal room          
and stept into the mother-night  
all fill’d with sacred quickening gloom  
where the few stars burn’d low and bright,  
and darkling on my darkling hill  
heard thro’ the beaches’ sullen boom          
heroic note of living will  
rung trumpet-clear against the fight;  
so stood and heard, and rais’d my eyes  
erect, that they might drink of space,  
and took the night upon my face,          
till time and trouble fell away  
and all my soul sprang up to feel  
as one among the stars that reel  
in rhyme on their rejoicing way,  
breaking the elder dark, nor stay          
but speed beyond each trammelling gyre,  
till time and sorrow fall away  
and night be wither’d up, and fire  
consume the sickness of desire.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110011 11110101 11011111 11010101 11010101 01010101 111101001 10111101 011111 11010101 01011101 11010101 11010111 01111111 01010111 11010101 01111111 11010111 01110101 10010111 1101111 11010101 01111010 010101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 899
Words 155
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 648
Words per stanza (avg) 153
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Christopher John Brennan

Christopher John Brennan was an Australian poet, scholar and literary critic. more…

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