Analysis of My Girl

Raymond Crocco 1960 (Mississippi)



I met this nice old girl
Prettiest to me it seems
I said why not give it whirl
Definite girl of my dreams
My girl said to me
You’re a decent guy
You’ll be alright
You’re a decent guy
Just move the clouds and let the light shine through
She and I used to talk a lot
I didn’t understand her very well
I always got things tied into knots
But the day our relationship fell
My girl said to me
You’re a decent guy
You’ll be alright
You’re a decent guy
Just move the clouds and let the light shine through
Well Wednesday night came
There was nothing I could do
I loved her just the same
It was too late to do what I had to do.
My girl said to me
You’re a decent guy
You’ll be alright
You’re a decent guy
I’ve moved the clouds and the light shines through.


Scheme ababCDEDFghihCDEDFjfjfCDEDf
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1001111 1111111 1001111 11111 10101 111 10101 1101010111 10111101 11010101 11111011 101100101 11111 10101 111 10101 1101010111 11011 1110111 110101 11111111111 11111 10101 111 10101 110100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 764
Words 154
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 582
Words per stanza (avg) 154
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Submitted by Rcrocco on January 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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