Analysis of out of control



crying makes my throat hurt
could my saddenes be assert

are my emotions loose
we ask but there's no use

could I be saved
or would I just be in eternal pain

could I reach out of this dark hole
or am I just out of control


Scheme AA BB XX CC
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 101111 111101 110101 111111 1111 1111100101 11111111 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 214
Words 47
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 43
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on January 10, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Myah

I am 13 and I feel unloved by everyone that I know and I. I wish I wasn't born maybe i'm thinking like a immature person but I try my best at life's obstacles. more…

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