Analysis of Loss of Kindness



Kindness is trickling away,
lost in the swift embrace of change,
plowed over by our sense of
insecurity.

We easily hide behind our doors,
not looking over our neighbors’
fences, cars slowly move by, as
paranoia raises its ugly head.

We embrace, as a friend, the fear of
the unknown, holding creative
exploration at a distance, suspicion
has become our password.

Conversations, seldom occur, though
often empty, meaningless exchanges.
Escape, rests at the core of our
interactions, now fearing closeness.

Taking back what has been lost requires
courage, facing the obstacles, creating
honored desires with change of self
and the community.


Scheme XXAB XCXX AXXX XXXX CXXB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 1011001 10010111 11011011 0100 1100101101 110101010 10110111 010101101 101101011 00110010 0101010010 101101 01010011 1010100010 011101110 01011010 1011111010 10100100010 100101111 000100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 625
Words 101
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on January 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alden Sproull

Born in Penna. worked in health care, wrote poems out of my work with clients in life’s challenging illnesses. Poems published in, Walking Along The Edge. Available on Amazon. check out reviews, more…

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