Analysis of Battle For Peace

Deshawn Yeldell 1977 (Huntsville)



My battle for peace my battle for peace carries on as time release,
 whom is a friend and who’s the foe?
O o o my soul be bleeding,
enemy enemies, whisper over my shoulder day by day the world becomes colder
the book of Riffs that’s my folder,
containing words heavy as boulders,
Dropping lower and lower a melting heart holder;
my God; my God I have become much wiser an older;
wiping the misery off my shoulder.
 -MillYentei


Scheme ABCDDEDDDF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11011110111011101 11010101 11111110 1001001010110111010110 01111110 010110110 1010010010110 11111101110110 1001001110 1
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 436
Words 81
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 333
Words per stanza (avg) 80
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Deshawn Yeldell

Wordsmith, ghostwriter, Book of Riffz_Muzik Author, Creative artist, African-American poet, Bagman designs.... DY_ MillYentei From Texas more…

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