Analysis of This doesn't shine...



[Verse 1]
Who wants to buy
This diamond ring?
She took it off her finger now
It doesn't mean a thing

[Chorus 1]
This diamond ring doesn't shine for me anymore
And this diamond ring doesn't mean what it did before
So if you've got someone whose love is true
Let it shine for you

[Verse 2]
This stone is genuine
Like love should be
And if your baby's truer than
My baby was to me

[Chorus 2]
This diamond ring can be something beautiful
And this diamond ring can be dreams that are coming true
And then your heart won't have to break like mine did
If there's love behind it

[Chorus 2]
This diamond ring can mean something beautiful
And this diamond ring can be dreams that are coming true
And then your heart won't have to break like mine did
If there's love behind it
[Chorus 1]
This diamond ring doesn't shine for me anymore
And this diamond ring doesn't mean what it did before
So if you've got someone whose love is true
Let it shine for you

[Chorus 1/Outro]
This diamond ring doesn't shine for me anymore
And this diamond ring doesn't mean what it did before...
( --G. Lewis ]


Scheme axbxb CDDEE axfxf CgEHI CgEHICDDEE dDDx
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1111 1101 11110101 110101 10 11011011101 0110110111101 111111111 11111 1 111100 1111 01110101 110111 10 11011110100 0110111111101 01111111111 111011 10 11011110100 0110111111101 01111111111 111011 10 11011011101 0110110111101 111111111 11111 101 11011011101 0110110111101 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,045
Words 206
Sentences 4
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 10, 4
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on November 11, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:06 min read
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Nobody Nose

19th Century Poet turned mathematician when his love interest dumped him, bereft of any reasons for her departure from his soul. more…

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