Analysis of Taking My Time



I'm taking my time with chores still to do;
I don't like to rush them at all.
I'm painting the kitchen a delicate hue,
And driving my wife up the wall!

She says that it should be finished by now.
I tell her you can't rush these things.
She looks unimpressed, with deep furrowed brow,
While outside a nightingale sings.

She says, "That reminds me, the garden's a mess!
I thought you were sorting that out!"
I say, "I'll do that tomorrow, I guess.
There's no need for you to shout!"

She'll be her old self in a few days' time;
These chores will be finished by then.
Meanwhile, here I am at the scene of my crime,
With the sun going down once again!

Copyright © Robert Haigh 2017


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111111 11111111 11001001001 01011101 1111111011 11011111 110111101 11101001 11101101001 11101011 111110111 1111111 1101100111 11111011 1111101111 101101101 10101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 712
Words 135
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on September 10, 2020

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Robert Haigh

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