Analysis of Thank you for being my shield

Baby Girl 1983 (Ohio)



Lord you have me here week to my knees,
Begging for  forgiveness please ,
Have mercy Father  (pause)
Please forgive me and  my enemies,

I give you all my  pain from  back in the days ,
I’m so tired of my carnal worldly  ways,
Without you I’m alone and afraid,

Father please dry my eyes,
I want to go home with you in  paradise,
In you is where I want to run and hide ,
Just like in  the book of Mathew , I believe that you will be on my side ,

I thank you so much for blessing me,
Father in your domain, I feel so spiritually  free,

Mark 1:36, give me security in your protection against the  enemies,
I know you have been here walking beside me ,

holding my hand
I thank you for saving me from sinking deep into quicksand.

Deuteronomy 31:6 (pause)

thank you for your promise , that you would never leave or forsake me
I thank you father for rescuing me
and setting my spirit free..


Scheme AABA CCX XXDD EE AE FF B EEE
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 1010101 110101 101101100 11111111001 11101110101 011101001 101111 1111111010 0111111101 110011101011111111 111111101 100101111100001 111010001010010100 11111110011 1011 11111011101011 11 1111101111011011 1111011001 0101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 873
Words 169
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 2, 2, 2, 1, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted by Baby_Girl_x3 on August 21, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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