Analysis of Time with the lord



Facing two misdemeanors and a felony 3
I was hurting like lighting struck a tree.
Then the lord came to me.
He said he’ll set my spirit free.
He dried the tears off my face ,
and told me his love can’t be replaced .
I told the lord , thanks for being here.
everyday I feel him near.
I asked the Lord to forgive my sin.
The lord said , Yes,
I’m happy you came back to me again.
My daughter, I’ve always loved you
and it’s not for pretend.
Then the lord said , If your falling apart,
Just remember I’m there to comfort you in the dark .
For this is how I feel:
I love you and always will.
I told the lord I feel dirty and grimy.
The lord said , I forgive you and I don’t hate you , because you plead guilty to your crime.
for you are my child and always be mine.
I have plans for you , and it all in the matter of time.
Don’t worry you will be fine.
I ask the lord will his love go thin?
The lord said no , don’t have little faith.
Remember , I died on the cross to wash away your sin.
I asked the lord about setting my children free to him.
The lord said , don’t  worry , I’m protecting them .
I told the lord I’m scared and don’t know what to do.
Then the lord said, remember my promise. I wont leave or forsake you.
Just humble yourself , my child.
I know your time in jail seems tragic,
but sit back, be patient, and let me do my magic ..


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Poetic Form
Metre 10101000100 1110110101 101111 11111101 1101111 01111111 110111101 1011111 110110111 0111 1101111101 1101111 011101 1011111001 1010111101001 111111 111011 11011110010 011101101111011110111 111110111 11111011001011 1101111 110111111 011111101 01011101110111 11010110110111 01111010101 110111011111 10110101101111011 1100111 111101110 1111100111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,336
Words 268
Sentences 26
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 32
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 996
Words per stanza (avg) 285
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Submitted by Baby_Girl_x3 on August 21, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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