Analysis of My Boating Song.

Horace Smith 1836 (London) – 1922



Oh this earth is a mineful of treasure,
A goblet, that's full to the brim,
And each man may take for his pleasure
The thing that's most pleasant to him;
Then let all, who are birds of my feather,
Throw heart and soul into my song;
Mark the time, pick it up all together,
And merrily row it along.

Hurrah, boys, or losing or winning,
Feel your stretchers and make the blades bend;
Hard on to it, catch the beginning,
And pull it clean through to the end.

I'll admit 'tis delicious to plunge in
Clear pools, with their shadows at rest;
'Tis nimble to parry, or lunge in
Your foil at the enemy's chest;
'Tis rapture to take a man's wicket,
Or lash round to leg for a four;
But somehow the glories of cricket
Depend on the state of the score.

But in boating, or losing or winning,
Though victory may not attend;
Oh, 'tis jolly to catch the beginning,
And pull it clean through to the end.

'Tis brave over hill and dale sweeping,
To be in at the death of the fox;
Or to whip, where the salmon are leaping,
The river that roars o'er the rocks;
'Tis prime to bring down the cock pheasant;
And yachting is certainly great;
But, beyond all expression, 'tis pleasant
To row in a rattling good eight.

Then, hurrah, boys, or losing or winning,
What matter what labour we spend?
Hard on to it, catch the beginning,
And pull it clean through to the end.

Shove her off!    Half a stroke!    Now, get ready!
Five seconds!    Four, three, two, one, gun!
Well started!    Well rowed!    Keep her steady!
You'll want all your wind e'er you've done.
Now you're straight!    Let the pace become swifter!
Roll the wash to the left and the right!
Pick it up all together, and lift her,
As though she would bound out of sight!

Hurrah, Hall!    Hall, now you're winning,
Feel your stretchers and make the blades bend;
Hard on to it, catch the beginning,
And pull it clean through to the end.

Bump!    Bump!    O ye gods, how I pity
The ears those sweet sounds never heard;
More tuneful than loveliest ditty
E'er poured from the throat of a bird.
There's a prize for each honest endeavour,
But none for the man who's a shirk;
And the pluck that we've showed on the river,
Shall tell in the rest of our work.

At the last, whether losing or winning,
This thought with all memories blend,--
We forgot not to catch the beginning,
And we pulled it clean through to the end.


Scheme ababacac dEDE fgfghihi dedE djdjklkl deDE mnmnaoao dEDE mpmpaqaq dede
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111101110 01011101 011111110 01111011 1111111110 11010111 1011111010 01001101 011110110 111001011 111110010 01111101 1011010110 1111111 110110110 11101001 110110110 11111101 11010110 01101101 1010110110 11001101 1110110010 01111101 111010110 110101101 1111010110 010111001 111110110 01011001 1011010110 11001011 1011110110 1101111 111110010 01111101 1011011110 11011111 110111010 111111011 1111010110 101101001 1111010010 11111111 01111110 111001011 111110010 01111101 111111110 01111101 1101110 101101101 1011110010 11101101 0011111010 110011101 1011010110 11111001 1011110010 011111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,339
Words 457
Sentences 32
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 8, 4, 8, 4, 8, 4, 8, 4
Lines Amount 60
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 177
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Horace Smith

Horace Smith was an English poet and novelist, perhaps best known for his participation in a sonnet-writing competition with Percy Bysshe Shelley. It was of him that Shelley said: "Is it not odd that the only truly generous person I ever knew who had money enough to be generous with should be a stockbroker? He writes poetry and pastoral dramas and yet knows how to make money, and does make it, and is still generous." more…

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